Sukune- e-dil ke liye raht-e-jigar ke liye

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Indranil Bhattacharjee ........."सैल" said…
आप बहुत अच्छा लिखते हो ... अगर आप थोडा बहार वैगेरह का ध्यान रखें तो आपकी शायरी में चार चाँद लग जायेगा ...
June 4, 2011 at 7:48 PM
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